Chapter 2 - 03

May 3rd, 2010, 12:41 am
They've both lost it! OAO
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salis May 3rd, 2010, 12:37 am
Ha ha, more drama from Hotaru! XD

Is it just me, or does it feel like this chapter starts out a little too fast? I've had to cut out a lot of the story to keep it within four chapters, but now I'm thinking I should just tell the story the way I want to, and let it be whatever chapters it has to be. (Er, within a reasonable amount, of course. >_<;)

Then again, maybe cutting to the chase is a good thing. =v=



- Ha ha, of course Yumi can't kill Hotaru! There's no surprise here! This chapter has only just begun for him to die on the third page. But those were good ideas! >w<

Hyli_Tuben_Mechanic - Yes! Very violent. XD And yeah, I'm on Hotaru's side too. The priestesses in this story are pretty much to blame for all his troubles in life.

abdie the hedgehog - Ah, I can see why you're confused. XD But no, this story doesn't take place in the feudal era of Japan. This is just a mishmash of East meets West with some fantasy thrown in. And thanks for the comment! :D

SkullzMelody - LOL, so true! So true! XD She's saving the punches for later.
And thank you so much!! K3

godmoderncommander - Oh yeah! >:3 Better yet, priestess with gun with attitude = SUPER SMEXY! XD

Pyua - Good guess! And yeah, it's MUCH much too early to be killing anybody off. People would be angry at me if I did. XD

ChiakiAida - Ha ha, no wait! You had it the first time! :3

MegamanZDevil - Oh gosh! I'd love it so much if you would! >//v//< Your art is amazing!!! *v*

Jazeki - Thanks! Yeah, I think I'll do that. It may end up being five chapters in the end, but at least I won't look back on it wishing I had told it differently. ^u^;

SolaratheHedgehog - Ha ha, you'll have to wait and see!! >:D

HaKu10 - Wow, you're good! That's right! >w<
And thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Heo Map - That's good! I don't want anyone to have a time period in mind for this comic. It's a complete fantasy story. Where priestesses carry guns! ;)

magekotarou - I love the fact that Hotaru's the one in danger, but you're still thinking of Nephi! X3

Hellgirl_120 - You think right!

Antlys - Ha ha, it will all be OK! Somehow!!

SeaLion - Thank you so much! <3 And yes! Exactly! I like to take the stereotypical and try to make it less so by putting my own spin on it. Make things more interesting! And thank you for the love! >w<
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ChiakiAida May 3rd, 2010, 12:53 am
FIRST COMMENT FINNALT! of course she will hit a spider kid not hotaru XD and...I don't blame hotaru that he hate them...
Well...I got to see the serious and angry face of yumi at least XD......
EDIT:....hotaru is close to cry or something?=u=
EDIT: THAT"S IT! she will hit a rock that will hit a spider! >W<!yay!.;..... i should try more ideas...
Hyli_Tuben_Mechanic May 3rd, 2010, 12:55 am
uh oh... O.O
You did say Yumi was violent.
I still can't help siding with Hotaru, even though it's his fault they're in this cave. >.<
I'm such a sucker for characters with animal ears.
abdie the hedgehog May 3rd, 2010, 1:24 am
I just though of some thing if there in the futal area how could she have a gun O.O but awesome a update also lol XD
godmoderncommander May 3rd, 2010, 8:43 am
Preist with gun = SEXY!! >:D
Pyua May 3rd, 2010, 8:55 am
I'm guessing there was a spider behind Hotaru?
Too early to kill our precious Hotaru! 8D
ChiakiAida May 3rd, 2010, 10:27 am
hmmm.... it can' be a spider kid but she can't killhimm either!I think is something thaat we will never guess....
MegamanZDevil May 3rd, 2010, 11:07 am
.. i really need to draw fanart for this comic right now. hnnng ///
Jazeki May 3rd, 2010, 1:13 pm
That gun was unexpected. And tell the story the way you want to tell it. I don't mind it being a bit longer if it means you can save stuff that doesn't necessarily need to be cut out.
SolaratheHedgehog May 3rd, 2010, 3:31 pm
HaKu10 May 3rd, 2010, 5:39 pm
I'm sure that the gun was aiming towards a spider behind Hotaru's head! :3
About the chapter; do whatever you wanna do! ^^ I don't mind, your story's awesome either way! XD
Heo Map May 4th, 2010, 12:44 pm
Gun has And there goes my grasp of the time period for this comic xD
magekotarou May 4th, 2010, 7:31 pm
O.O oh my god HOTARU!!!!

(hopefully nephi is ok! ;D)
Hellgirl_120 May 5th, 2010, 9:36 pm
I think she shoots a spider.
Antlys May 8th, 2010, 5:39 am
Hotaruuuu nuuu~~ T_T
worlok375 (Guest) May 8th, 2010, 9:45 pm
She shoots off one of his ears and uses the blood to summon fire. Ear #2 that is. (which makes him look more human)
SeaLion May 9th, 2010, 1:20 pm
Actionnn OMG this is awesome 8D <3
Classic idea with some uniquely-interesting characters! -love+fav-
Kafeole12 May 22nd, 2010, 7:16 am
OMG. Shes shows no mercy.
If it was me, I would have started to cry and said "I'm sorry" but yeah.
A gun solves everything.
Apperantly, she can live with blood on her hands.
Tablix October 27th, 2010, 3:58 am
-puts shades on- terminator priestes >3